At first, when reading Carrie Brown’s story, it was difficult for me to follow. I couldn’t understand who the narrator was and who this story was really about. I had read that Tomas was the cousin, but I felt as though she should have mentioned that previous to when she said it. However, I thought it was a beautiful story given from this point of view. I really enjoyed how she made the characters so complex and gave information that you don’t usually get about the other characters in a story. She did an amazing job of giving details and describing, giving the reader visuals as to what you should see and what was most important.